Rimu+Novel


 * __Plan:__**

Book Cover Photo

2x People - Boy and Girl (Elise and Mitchell) 1x Camera

Appearance: Hair down Clothes: In Uniform Normal School Bags

Location: Across from Fraser Cove, by Traffic Lights.

Action: Walking on the the footpath near traffic lights * brother pulling the sister for safety.*

__Wednesday 15 June 2011__

Changes I Made: I shortened sentences and made some words shorter.

**After**

**Before**

__Wednsday 9 June 2011__

Rimu Novel Inquiry